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This is the surprise I said you, dear Sylvy.

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A Birthday´s Poem for Sylvy, 923178 on devianArt.

Now, that you are here there, Sylvy dear,
On this day, the one that´s your special day,
The greatest day yours, that´s your Birthday
I want make long of you any fear,
And I want too you know, sweet girl
You have on me for sure a server
And if it´s your will it will be for ever
Believe it, and believe me, too so nice girl!

See, my so dear friend, I am happy for real
You went in to my life and me yours,
And I considerate for sure it´s all great deal
That both have things we can call "Ours"

And me couldn´t this day to forget
So I did the things as they fairly needed
Since I know how sweet girl I get
When her tender heart she has me seemed



And for that I made you this poetry,
Sylvy, the sweet, it´s my gift for your party
Of which you are for sure totally worthy,
Valuable girl, because you are so nice and so pretty.

I hope really you like this congratulation
That with all the best wishes I have done for you,
To do it it´s too a deserved publication
Of all the good things I have from you.

Hugs and Kisses from your Mexican friend Felipe, dear Sylvia!!!
Happy Birthday!!! I am so happy you have it this year again!!!
Hi here, my dear and sweet and cute friend Sylvy, so important to me, ^^!!! See, this is the surprise I said to you yesterday, that I hope you see so soon as possible and you like it actually, since I wrote it to you doing the best I could, and well, nice girl, even my English perhaps is not so good for the poems, some people thinks yet I am better as writter than as drawer, and so I wanted to give you a very special gift on this your special day, with all my best wishes, ^^!!! Many :tighthug:s and kisses, my dear friend Silvia, so cute and important to me, ^^!!! Be Happy on this your Birthday, sweet young girl, ^^!!!

Hi my appreciated friends, this written deviation is gift for my dear and very important friend :icon923178: here on this site and out there, :), I hope for real she likes it, even I am not so good on poems on English, and I did guess this was a Free Verse, since I took care of the riddles so much I could, but not much of the metric, I knew today I would be busy, the normal these days, but never so much that I would forget the speacialest day of my sweet friend, so lovable, ^^!!!
I hope you like it too, :)!!!
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Oh thank you for the poem I love It!!